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审题：
《西湖晨景》该题目非常简洁，在提纲中已给出文章的主题，即越来越多的外国人喜爱在中国生活——在描述图画后，给出原因即可。
Sample：
What an attractive scene it is！ On such a peaceful and beautiful morning by West Lake； a middleaged foreigner is jogging—he is enjoying the fresh air； cool breeze and charming scenery。 From this picture； we can see clearly that the foreigner enjoys life in this Chinese city； Hangzhou。
As a matter of fact； in the past few years； more and more foreigners have chosen to live in China。 Some work here； some pursue their study in universities and even some join volunteer activities in China。 The reasons why more and more foreigners like to live in China can be listed as follows。 To begin with； since China’s reform and openingup in 1978； our country has witnessed great progress in nearly all aspects of the society； especially in economy； which provides a far better environment of working； investing and studying for foreigners。 Second； economic globalization has made cultural blending possible and necessary。 Foreigners have e to know more and more about Chinese culture and bee influenced by it； which has formed the important basis of their living in China。 Last but not the least； it is obvious that with every effort we have made in environmental protection； our country has bee a place more and more suitable and pleasant to live in。
In my opinion； the arrival of foreigners brings more chances and opportunities of economic development。 So why not seize such chances to embrace our bright future？
点评：
第一段描述图画。这一段写得非常精彩，先以感叹句开头，而后描述图画，最后小结——这位外国人喜爱在杭州的生活。
第二段前两句总结了外国人来我国的现象。第三句是原因类的模板句，而后分三点来说：第一点是说改革开放后我国经济发展迅速，给外国人提供了很好的工作、投资和学习环境；第二点是说经济全球化促进文化融合——外国人对中国文化了解更多，这构成了他们在中国生活的重要基础；第三点是说环境保护效果显著，居住条件自然改善了。
最后一段说外国人的到来带到了更多的经济发展的机会，所以为什么不抓住这些机会来拥抱我们美好的明天呢？
心得：
要写出好文章，首先要对文章的基本结构非常熟悉，而后再做出一些变化，这些变化通常就是亮点。比如第一段先使用了一个感叹句，立即吸引了读者的注意力。第三段第二句使用了反问句，效果非常强烈。
Directions 3
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the drawing；
2。 analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job； and
3。 point out the possible ways to solve the problem。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
《招员工七名》 这篇文章关注的是当前重要的就业难问题。它的要求非常明确，在描述图画后，先给出原因，再给出解决办法，这是非常常见的文章模式。
Sample：
The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands。 Around a desk in the front of the drawing； there are dozens of students waiting to hand in their resumes but only seven are wanted by the pany as is written on a board beside the desk。
It is clear that the drawer wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today’s university graduates are faced with in finding a job。 In fact； in many universities and colleges； the employment rate of graduates is lower than 50％ and much fewer can find a satisfactory job。 The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows。 In the first place； the enrolment expansion of universities and colleges has resulted in a great increase in the number of graduates every year； which has exceeded the increase in positions in the job market。 What makes things worse is that quite a lot of students like to choose those hot majors when they enter the university and to look for jobs in big developed cities when they graduate。 So it is even more difficult for them to find a suitable job。
From my point of view； the society and the graduates need to join their hands in the endeavor to solve this problem。 On the one hand； the society should continue to focus on economic development so as to provide bigger employment chances for the graduates。 On the other hand； the students should choose the majors that they are really interested in and well capable of and broaden their horizon when looking for jobs。 Only in this way can they gain larger space for their future career。
点评：
该文分为三段，第一段描述图画，第二段对此问题进行了小结，而后给出了原因。第三段提出了解决问题的办法。
第一段共用两句话，第一句是远景，第二句由远及近，展示了求职者之多与实际招聘人数之少。第二段共分六句话，前两句总结了大学毕业生就业难这一情况，第三句话是原因类的模板句。第四句话说扩招带来的影响。第五句话和第六句话说大学生选择热门的专业，使就业难的矛盾更加突出。第三段共分四句话，第一句话是总括句，说社会和毕业生应携起手来解决问题，而后分两句话分别说明。最后一句话是总结，使用了语气强烈的倒装句。
心得：
这是常考的模式，望大家用心学习。
Directions 4
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the table；
2。 suggest possible solutions to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in China。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
国家 大学年平均学费 国民人均年收入 比值
美国 4，700美元 35，000美元 1/8
英国 1，500英镑 15，000英镑 1/10
中国 7，500元 7，500元 1
审题：
在审题的环节中，我们应当将读图表（图画）和看提纲有机地结合起来。有的时候，提纲中会把文章的主题直接给出来，这时我们文章的整体布局就会容易得多。在这道题的提纲中，就出现了“中国大学学费负担沉重的问题”的字样，这就是该文的主题，我们的文章应该围绕它展开。
Sample：
From the above table we can see that in America and Britain the ratio of average annual tuition of universities to gross national ine per capita is about 1 to 10； but astonishingly that in China is 1。 That is to say； the burden of university tuition on Chinese families is nearly ten times heavier than that on American or British families。 As a matter of fact； most Chinese families feel it difficult to afford the high tuition of their children； and some absolutely cannot afford it； which has received more and more concern from all over the country。
In order to solve this problem； I strongly suggest the following solutions。 First and foremost； it is a must to reduce the cost of higher education。 We need to cut down the staff in universities； most of whom now have a disproportionately large number of administrators。 The now widespread corruption should also be eliminated in universities； such as unnecessary tours and banquets at public expense。 Moreover； much importance should be attached to the reform of management system of higher education。 The national government should not only increase financial investment in higher education but also optimize the distribution of such money。
To sum up； it is high time to pay enough attention to the problem of the heavy burden