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All in all； urbanization brings more benefits than problems。 The present society is experiencing great changes—what we should be sure is that we strike a balance between economical development and environmental protection。
点评：
在提纲中出现关键词，是少见的，我们一定要抓住这里的重要信息。这里的urbanization即是文章讨论的主题。
文章共分四段。首段在描述图画后做了小结，巧妙引入本文主题——城市化。第二段与第三段分别谈论城市化的利和弊。第二段列举了城市化的两个优点。第三段写了城市化的三个缺点。第四段下结论——城市化的利大于弊。
心得：
该文结构比较简单，解决了结构问题后，我们就应该在语言上面多下功夫。
首段末句使用平行结构与分号引出本文主题——城市化，非常引人注目。次段第一点中的move out of the downtown area and into the suburbs这一词组是同一动词接不同地点状语的情形。第二点中的With more and more people ing to the city是介词引导的复合结构。第三段第一点中的shrink表示缩减，用在这里很妥当。第二点中的decay表示“变坏”。第三点中的pursue表示“追求”。末段的第二句中有破折号的用法。
Direction 19
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the table；
2。 give possible reasons for the change；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
年份 1999 2000 2001 2002
我国城镇登记失业人数（万人） 575 595 681 770
我国城镇登记失业率（％） 3。1 3。1 3。6 4。0
审题：
这是一道图表题。在考研的大作文中，近年来出现几率最大的是图画题，而图表题出现的几率就要小一些。与图画题相似，图表题的首段总是要描述图表。按照这篇文章的提纲，第二段应写成描写原因的段落。第三点提纲是给出评论，对于社会问题类的情形，一般写作解决问题的办法。最后可有一段做结。
Sample：
As can be seen from the table； the number of registered unemployed persons in urban areas of our nation has increased from 5。75 million in 1999 to 7。7 million in 2002。 Accordingly； the registered unemployment rate in urban areas has jumped from 3。1 percent to 4 percent during the same period。
In my mind； the reasons why the unemployment rate of our nation has been on the rise are as follows。 First of all； under market economy； private factories and foreign panies take the lead in improving efficiency and lowering the cost—in the due process； cutting the number of employees is always a choice。 Furthermore； stateowned enterprises also have been undergoing fundamental changes。 The traditional mode of high employment； low salary has largely been reformed to keep pace with the economic takeoff。 In such a transformation period； some of them fail to meet the needs of the market； and finally go bankrupt； leaving many more people jobless。
To successfully cope with the present problem； several measures should be taken。 On the one hand； the government should create more job opportunities by gradually optimizing the industrial structure。 On the other hand； the employees should seize every chance to improve personal skills。 With higher expertise； they are able to stand up to the challenges of a new job。
Such problems are largely the natural result of the rapid economic development initiated by the reform and openingup policy。 When all of us have the courage to face the challenge and the determination to adapt to the change； a sound solution will not be far away。
点评：
本文分为四段。第一段描述图表非常简洁，将头尾趋势描述了出来，每个变量的数据超过三个，所以不必一一描述。
第二段是描述原因的段落，首句是模板句。第一点中的take the lead in improving efficiency and lowering the cost表示“率先提高效率、降低成本”。第二点分三句话，第一句中的stateowned enterprises表示“国有企业”，undergo fundamental changes表示“经历了根本的变化”。第二句中的the traditional mode of high employment； low salary表示“高就业率、低工资的传统模式”，the economic takeoff表示“经济腾飞”。第三句中的go bankrupt表示“破产”。
心得：
图表题出现得较少，变化也比图画题少一些。我们应首先熟悉图表中对于数据变化的描述，而后对全文段落的安排做到心中有数。
Direction 20
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the table；
2。 interpret the trend；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
指标名称 1989 1997 2002
每万人口医院床位数（张） 22。8 23。5 23。2
每万人口医生数（人） 15。2 16。1 14。7
人均卫生总费用支出（元） 76。7 186。4 442。5
审题：
审题包括两个部分，一个是读图画或图表，一个是看提纲。成功的审题就是将两者有机地结合起来，确定文章的最终布局。这道题还是属于图表题中的表格题，比较特殊。表格中共有三个变量，应该看出来有一个变量，即人均卫生总费用支出是大幅增长的，而另两个变量，即每万人口医院床位数和每万人口医生数，是基本未变的。第一段的工作就是描述这两个趋势。第二段中阐释这一趋势，就是要重点突出这一对比。第三段做出评论，对于一种不能令人满意的现状甚至令人担忧的社会问题，大多数时候最好的选择就是写改进或解决问题的办法了。
Sample：
From the table we can see clearly that total medical expenses per capita rose from 76。5 yuan in 1989 to 186。4 yuan in 1997 and then to 442。5 yuan in 2002。 In the same period； the number of hospital beds every 10；000 people and the number of doctors every 10；000 people stayed at almost the same level。
This table illustrates clearly the discrepancy between the soaring medical expenses and the unsatisfactory hospital facilities。 On the one hand； the money spent on medical care has climbed sharply in the past decade。 According to the National Bureau of Statistics； the medical expense has soared to 7。3 percent of the total expenses of urban residents； and 6。0 of that of rural residents in 2003。 On the other hand； the limited scale of hospitals cannot meet the needs of our people。 It is true that we have more advanced medical instruments； but the numbers of beds and doctors have changed little over the last decade。 We all know that timely medical operation is extremely important in many cases； but how can we ensure it without finding a bed first？
To improve the present situation we have a long way to go。 In the first place； we have to standardize medical practices； regulate the drug circulation and perfect the medical care system to bring down the medical expenses。 In the second place； we should build more firstclass hospitals； expand the scale of present hospitals and turn out more medical talents。 If all of these can be acplished our people will surely receive better medical care and live a happier life。
点评：
本文共分三段。第一段两句话，第一句话以常见的句型From the table we can see clearly that开始，描写了人均卫生总费用支出逐年攀升的事实。而第二句以In the same period强势开头，描述了其它两个变量基本不变（stay at almost the same level）的情形，概括性很强。
第二段首句对上面的数字变化进行总结，突出了discrepancy（差异）一词，一方面是高涨（soar）的医疗费用，另一方面是不能令人满意的医院设施，而后分两方面来说。第一方面分两句话，先说医疗费用剧烈攀升。而后举出国家统计局的数字，是医疗费用占城市和农村居民支出的百分比，�